Author: Amanda Lovelace

Tuesday, February 27, 2018

Centers the White Person’s Experience: The Witch Doesn’t Burn in This One by Amanda Lovelace

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Centers the White Person’s Experience: The Witch Doesn’t Burn in This One by Amanda Lovelace
The Witch Doesn't Burn in This One
Amanda Lovelace
Genre: Verse
Publication date: March 6th, 2018
by Andrew McNeel Publishing

The witch: supernaturally powerful, inscrutably independent, and now—indestructible. These moving, relatable poems encourage resilience and embolden women to take control of their own stories. Enemies try to judge, oppress, and marginalize her, but the witch doesn’t burn in this one.
-A copy was provided by Andrew McNeel Publishing for review-

Here is my thing with this short collection of poems. It’s good. It’s really good. It is also extremely creative and Lovelace’s talent really shines through with the poems. The problem I had and why I don’t actually know what to rate the collection of poems is that it also felt like it was very much the narrative of a white, cishet person.

Amanda Lovelace is a white woman which explains this and I wouldn’t ask her to write from a POC perspective when she really really REALLY cannot claim those experiences. EDIT: I was informed that Amanda Lovelace is demigirl, demisexual, and demiromantic and I wrongly assumed her identity for which I apologize. She does try to not forget her non white cishet counterparts within her poems, which is appreciated but that doesn’t change the fact that the entire time I was reading the poems, I was painfully aware of my identity is a woman of color and how different my experiences are from hers.

I ~am~ a cis woman so do take what I say with a grain of salt (and call me out if I say something out of line), but I really felt like there were ways she could have also made the narrative more inclusionary of non-binary folk. There are a lot of she/her pronouns used which, to me, entirely disregards the experiences of people who were assigned female at birth and more feminine presenting individuals.

The experiences she writes about will be so painfully true not just for white, cishet women. There are so many people who irrelevant of gender, sexual and racial identity ~will~ experience the things talked about because the world fucking SUCKS.

I just wished Lovelace had done more to open the stories to a slightly wider range of people.

As a woman of color, every second I am not at home, I will be afraid of patriarchal figures not just because I am a woman who has been hurt by the patriarchy but because I am a non-white woman who has inherited generations of hurt because of colonization.

So, should you read The Witch Doesn’t Burn in This One? That will be your call to make and not mine but if you aren’t a white cis-het individual, it might help to know that a lot of the language centers the experience of a very certain identity. I don’t believe that means you won’t be able to relate to anything within these poems. They are emotionally potent and also really empowering at times but like me, you might be painfully aware of how your experiences just don’t line up the exact same way.

2.5 Stars
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